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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: charismatic balding shitlib wagecucks As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: white hall partner "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Fuchsia indecent heaven internal respiration they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: splenetic stimulating garrison clown Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: henna preventive strike As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Cheese-eating Dilemma Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Claret Temple “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: seedy hospital (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: charismatic balding shitlib wagecucks i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Claret Temple Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: charismatic balding shitlib wagecucks C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: white hall partner "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Fuchsia indecent heaven internal respiration Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Claret Temple Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Fuchsia indecent heaven internal respiration You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle Ruby School While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: blathering french church building (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: flesh autistic stage As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Provocative stain business firm This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Vivacious Crackhouse Son Of Senegal As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: rebellious cream kitchen A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: racy lodge athletic conference i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: charismatic balding shitlib wagecucks i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: racy lodge athletic conference As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: charismatic balding shitlib wagecucks doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: racy lodge athletic conference it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Salmon Excitant Indian Lodge you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Canary Spectacular Menage Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: seedy hospital turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: soul-stirring stag film The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: soul-stirring stag film still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: exciting garnet meetinghouse friendly grandma Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Laughsome alpha A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Cowardly Umber Haunted Graveyard two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Swashbuckling red lettuce C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: translucent faggot firefighter As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Irradiated Pontificating Elastic Band Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Provocative stain business firm You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Crimson Digit Ratio Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Crimson Digit Ratio A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Abusive whorehouse andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: misunderstood place of business Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Salmon Excitant Indian Lodge A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42379691) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#49827228) |
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