The most prestigious law school admissions discussion board in the world.
|
 |
 
|
Good writers: Fix this clunky sentence I can't seem to fix
| razzle-dazzle hairless office | 04/30/21 |
| Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry | 04/30/21 |
| walnut market shitlib | 04/30/21 |
| Razzle Flickering Electric Furnace Mad Cow Disease | 04/30/21 |
| maroon wild private investor | 05/02/21 |
| Dark bawdyhouse toilet seat | 02/25/22 |
| Concupiscible coiffed abode | 04/30/21 |
| Disrespectful messiness | 04/30/21 |
| razzle-dazzle hairless office | 04/30/21 |
| Concupiscible coiffed abode | 04/30/21 |
| razzle-dazzle hairless office | 04/30/21 |
| Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry | 04/30/21 |
| walnut market shitlib | 04/30/21 |
| Concupiscible coiffed abode | 04/30/21 |
| walnut market shitlib | 04/30/21 |
| Balding stag film | 04/30/21 |
| marvelous crystalline trailer park ape | 04/30/21 |
| Contagious emerald turdskin volcanic crater | 04/30/21 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| razzle-dazzle hairless office | 04/30/21 |
| Pink alcoholic laser beams | 04/30/21 |
| Filthy site | 04/30/21 |
| Azure Unhinged Place Of Business Chapel | 04/30/21 |
| metal yapping hall | 05/04/22 |
| bull headed appetizing circlehead faggotry | 04/30/21 |
| sexy amber property | 04/30/21 |
| Sapphire mother | 04/30/21 |
| mewling irradiated indirect expression scourge upon the earth | 04/30/21 |
| Red parlour puppy | 04/30/21 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| cheese-eating school cafeteria | 04/30/21 |
| Histrionic Kitchen Brethren | 04/30/21 |
| multi-colored blathering center immigrant | 04/30/21 |
| Pink alcoholic laser beams | 04/30/21 |
| Adulterous karate water buffalo | 04/30/21 |
| Red parlour puppy | 05/01/21 |
| Red parlour puppy | 04/30/21 |
| Disrespectful messiness | 04/30/21 |
| Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy | 04/30/21 |
| Disrespectful messiness | 04/30/21 |
| Mint deep jew theatre | 04/30/21 |
| shaky mood | 04/30/21 |
| sepia motley pistol nibblets | 04/30/21 |
| Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry | 04/30/21 |
| Hot temple juggernaut | 04/30/21 |
| razzle-dazzle hairless office | 04/30/21 |
| Hot temple juggernaut | 04/30/21 |
| razzle-dazzle hairless office | 04/30/21 |
| Hot temple juggernaut | 04/30/21 |
| walnut market shitlib | 04/30/21 |
| racy cuckold | 04/30/21 |
| Electric Abnormal Lettuce Depressive | 04/30/21 |
| Disrespectful messiness | 04/30/21 |
| sepia motley pistol nibblets | 04/30/21 |
| cheese-eating school cafeteria | 04/30/21 |
| titillating spot roommate | 04/30/21 |
| shaky mood | 04/30/21 |
| titillating spot roommate | 04/30/21 |
| Concupiscible coiffed abode | 04/30/21 |
| Sapphire mother | 04/30/21 |
| sexy amber property | 04/30/21 |
| curious indecent piazza | 04/30/21 |
| Territorial insanely creepy french chef marketing idea | 02/22/22 |
| talented yellow space | 04/30/21 |
| Fragrant Range | 04/30/21 |
| talented yellow space | 04/30/21 |
| Fragrant Range | 04/30/21 |
| Histrionic Kitchen Brethren | 04/30/21 |
| walnut market shitlib | 04/30/21 |
| Insane cowardly stock car | 04/30/21 |
| Transparent Pisswyrm | 02/22/22 |
| Bistre cocky locale | 06/22/22 |
| marvelous crystalline trailer park ape | 04/30/21 |
| sepia motley pistol nibblets | 04/30/21 |
| Insane cowardly stock car | 04/30/21 |
| Pink alcoholic laser beams | 04/30/21 |
| Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy | 04/30/21 |
| Transparent Pisswyrm | 04/30/21 |
| Pink alcoholic laser beams | 04/30/21 |
| shaky mood | 04/30/21 |
| Adulterous karate water buffalo | 06/22/22 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| carmine internet-worthy ratface | 04/30/21 |
| underhanded dashing new version stage | 04/30/21 |
| Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy | 04/30/21 |
| carmine internet-worthy ratface | 06/01/21 |
| Transparent Pisswyrm | 02/22/22 |
| carmine internet-worthy ratface | 02/22/22 |
| Transparent Pisswyrm | 02/25/22 |
| beta travel guidebook organic girlfriend | 05/04/22 |
| Bistre cocky locale | 06/22/22 |
| Insane cowardly stock car | 06/22/22 |
| splenetic university roast beef | 06/22/22 |
| buff library deer antler | 04/30/21 |
| Mint deep jew theatre | 04/30/21 |
| avocado beady-eyed gas station psychic | 04/30/21 |
| cream deranged mental disorder stain | 04/30/21 |
| lilac submissive really tough guy cruise ship | 04/30/21 |
| supple business firm coldplay fan | 04/30/21 |
| Gaped Institution | 04/30/21 |
| vibrant ebony therapy | 04/30/21 |
| Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy | 04/30/21 |
| Transparent Pisswyrm | 04/30/21 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| Fragrant Range | 04/30/21 |
| Transparent Pisswyrm | 02/22/22 |
| sick doobsian stead sandwich | 04/30/21 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| Ruby Violent Area Prole | 04/30/21 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| Pink alcoholic laser beams | 04/30/21 |
| House-broken rambunctious legend | 04/30/21 |
| House-broken rambunctious legend | 04/30/21 |
| Bateful Outnumbered Dingle Berry Theater Stage | 04/30/21 |
| Pearl Hairraiser National | 04/30/21 |
| Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy | 04/30/21 |
| Obsidian exciting sanctuary elastic band | 04/30/21 |
| racy cuckold | 04/30/21 |
| racy cuckold | 05/02/21 |
| racy cuckold | 05/23/21 |
| citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor | 05/02/21 |
| Territorial insanely creepy french chef marketing idea | 02/22/22 |
| Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry | 02/25/22 |
| Peach location macaca | 06/22/22 |
| Pet Relief Area | 04/19/26 |
| UN peacekeeper | 04/19/26 |
| hmmm i think weather is fraudlies | 04/19/26 |
| Pet Relief Area | 04/19/26 |
Poast new message in this thread
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: razzle-dazzle hairless office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376133) |
 |
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: walnut market shitlib they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
|
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Razzle Flickering Electric Furnace Mad Cow Disease Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377665) |
|
Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: maroon wild private investor As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42386999) |
|
Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Dark bawdyhouse toilet seat Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Concupiscible coiffed abode “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Disrespectful messiness (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376148) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: razzle-dazzle hairless office i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Concupiscible coiffed abode Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376166) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: razzle-dazzle hairless office C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376201) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry "at this time"
ROFL |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: walnut market shitlib Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376155) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Concupiscible coiffed abode Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376160) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: walnut market shitlib You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376205) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Balding stag film While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376157) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: marvelous crystalline trailer park ape (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376168) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Contagious emerald turdskin volcanic crater As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376174) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: razzle-dazzle hairless office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376203) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Pink alcoholic laser beams (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376392) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Filthy site (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376526) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Azure Unhinged Place Of Business Chapel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376657) |
|
Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: metal yapping hall Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44453959) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: bull headed appetizing circlehead faggotry As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376178) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: sexy amber property (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376332) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Sapphire mother (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376340) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: mewling irradiated indirect expression scourge upon the earth FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376183) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Red parlour puppy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376187) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376195) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: cheese-eating school cafeteria (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376249) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Histrionic Kitchen Brethren (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376406) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: multi-colored blathering center immigrant (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376713) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Pink alcoholic laser beams (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376724) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Adulterous karate water buffalo (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377057) |
|
Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Red parlour puppy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42380818) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Red parlour puppy As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376184) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Disrespectful messiness i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376191) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42378174) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Disrespectful messiness i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376189) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Mint deep jew theatre (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376669) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: shaky mood A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376194) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: sepia motley pistol nibblets (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376341) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376816) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Hot temple juggernaut i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: razzle-dazzle hairless office i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376206) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Hot temple juggernaut As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: razzle-dazzle hairless office doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376216) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Hot temple juggernaut it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: walnut market shitlib Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: racy cuckold you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Electric Abnormal Lettuce Depressive Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376217) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Disrespectful messiness turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376233) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: sepia motley pistol nibblets (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376607) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: cheese-eating school cafeteria As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376246) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: titillating spot roommate The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376290) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: shaky mood star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376306) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: titillating spot roommate still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Concupiscible coiffed abode (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376330) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Sapphire mother Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376331) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: sexy amber property (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376336) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: curious indecent piazza A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376358) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:09 AM Author: Territorial insanely creepy french chef marketing idea (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44008930) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: talented yellow space So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376389) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Fragrant Range 400 km/h, 450 km/h, 500 km/h, 550 km/h; A could feel the force of the acceleration pressing him against the sport bucket seats of his Turbo Allegra Mk. 2, their soft, well-sourced alcantara cosseting his tightly leather chapped legs, the micromechanical motors within instantaneously adjusting to each minor perturbation in the vehicle's three-axis orientation to keep him perfectly balanced, its SWIFT systems scanning kilometers ahead of them in real-time and predictively modulating the various electromagnetic and anti-kinetic shielding systems in order to protect their passage as they rocketed upward toward the gateway to area X--area X, the Sacred Seat of Cybernetic Heaven, its secrets whispering to the hovels of his birthplace below, beckoning brave boys with the Siren Song: "Come, Unlock Our Treasurehosue of Wonder or Die Trying"; "It's a goddamn marvel--" that was B, his copilot jockey, in the seat beside him--he'd always liked the tech stuff, engineered things were his jig and jive and the natural knack he'd expressed for them had been evident since his Fourth Year when he'd spontaneously programmed a molecular excavator during off time while the rest of the class was at the playground; he and B had been practicing for this for over three years, secretive sessions when the sensor rings slipped from alignment every third week on Sunday for maintena--"we have a fucking BOGEY at 3 o'clock HIGH!" B screamed, interrupting his meditation on the past--the systems of the Allegra were fast, but B was faster and he'd spotted the incoming a split second before the computerized indication of the same: "Warning, SWIFT has detected an intrusion in the third--" he cut off the computer; he knew what he needed to know: C was moving to intercept them in his Outrigger, accompanied by D; they'd planned for this eventuality, both the conflict itself and the psychology of facing your own brother and cousin 45 kilometers up in the air, each precise maneuver tiptoeing on the razor thin edge between life and death, a minute miscalculation capable of throwing you off the wrong side into a fiery midair death--there was something poignant about it, the notion that he could die up here in an instant and to his friends and family in the warrens of Bressville below, toiling through their daily tasks with no comprehension of the enormous aerial pageantry above them, his life could blot out with no greater signifier than a vanishing spot of light in the sky; he banished the thought of this and other things as he shouted in the cockpit "let's smoke these fuckers" and pushed down hard on the throttle, the frame of the Allegra bending, straining, complying with the command as they soared to meet the enemy head on, he and B laughing aloud at the thrill of it all. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376393) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: talented yellow space Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376411) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Fragrant Range I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376419) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:15 AM Author: Histrionic Kitchen Brethren (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376574) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:54 AM Author: walnut market shitlib Your stuff is the only stuff from here I share w my wife. Every time, I explain that "It's just lawyers--we get bored at work--yeah, I know, that's what makes it funny--" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376824) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:21 PM Author: Insane cowardly stock car (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377415) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Transparent Pisswyrm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44008886) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Bistre cocky locale (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44722509) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: marvelous crystalline trailer park ape (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376432) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: sepia motley pistol nibblets titcr. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376504) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:10 AM Author: Insane cowardly stock car 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376531) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: Pink alcoholic laser beams (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376589) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376641) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Transparent Pisswyrm holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376648) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Pink alcoholic laser beams attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376708) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:13 PM Author: shaky mood how (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377366) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:36 AM Author: Adulterous karate water buffalo (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44722527) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376711) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: carmine internet-worthy ratface (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376866) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: underhanded dashing new version stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376872) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42378128) |
|
Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: carmine internet-worthy ratface (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42558237) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Transparent Pisswyrm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44008882) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: carmine internet-worthy ratface this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44008910) |
|
Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: Transparent Pisswyrm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44032706) |
|
Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: beta travel guidebook organic girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44453902) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: Bistre cocky locale wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44722507) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: Insane cowardly stock car (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44722517) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: splenetic university roast beef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44722548) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: buff library deer antler High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376422) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Mint deep jew theatre (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376672) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: avocado beady-eyed gas station psychic Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376456) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: cream deranged mental disorder stain A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376505) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: lilac submissive really tough guy cruise ship two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376517) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: supple business firm coldplay fan C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376555) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Gaped Institution As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376600) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: vibrant ebony therapy Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376665) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Transparent Pisswyrm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376704) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376736) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Fragrant Range (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377648) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: Transparent Pisswyrm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44008887) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: sick doobsian stead sandwich writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376695) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376699) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Ruby Violent Area Prole What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376738) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376746) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Pink alcoholic laser beams (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42376800) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: House-broken rambunctious legend Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377389) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: House-broken rambunctious legend A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377381) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Bateful Outnumbered Dingle Berry Theater Stage andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
|
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Pearl Hairraiser National I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42377484) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Wonderful Misanthropic Crackhouse Ladyboy great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42378176) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Obsidian exciting sanctuary elastic band Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: racy cuckold A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42379691) |
|
Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: racy cuckold (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42387061) |
|
Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: racy cuckold (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42509184) |
|
Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: citrine mildly autistic fortuitous meteor Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#42386977) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Territorial insanely creepy french chef marketing idea As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44008916) |
|
Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: Ivory Mentally Impaired Cuckoldry OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44032743) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Peach location macaca i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#44722512) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#49827186) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#49827205) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#49827228) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2),#49827363) |