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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: stimulating irate nursing home As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: ebony volcanic crater affirmative action "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: swashbuckling apoplectic electric furnace hall they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: laughsome gay wizard Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: spruce filthpig elastic band As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: scarlet contagious sex offender Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: pea-brained cerise brethren dilemma “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: lime hairraiser spot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: stimulating irate nursing home i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: pea-brained cerise brethren dilemma Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stimulating irate nursing home C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: ebony volcanic crater affirmative action "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: swashbuckling apoplectic electric furnace hall Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: pea-brained cerise brethren dilemma Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: swashbuckling apoplectic electric furnace hall You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Narrow-minded Racy Set While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Insane rigor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Kink-friendly fragrant preventive strike As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Razzmatazz deer antler stage This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stimulating irate nursing home (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Shimmering judgmental area keepsake machete (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: cobalt heaven (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: vivacious center patrolman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: stirring pozpig Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: slate lascivious candlestick maker As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Mauve haunted graveyard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Duck-like vibrant weed whacker church (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: frum resort skinny woman FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Lilac windowlicker stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Razzmatazz deer antler stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: mustard pisswyrm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: amethyst impertinent principal's office indirect expression (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: Marvelous Stubborn Market Incel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Shimmering judgmental area keepsake machete (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: arousing selfie shitlib (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Lilac windowlicker stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Lilac windowlicker stage As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: lime hairraiser spot i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Dashing Ratface Orchestra Pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: lime hairraiser spot i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Lemon comical antidepressant drug (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Bat Shit Crazy Crackhouse Partner A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: violent azn mental disorder (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: ebony volcanic crater affirmative action sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Spectacular self-absorbed tanning salon i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: stimulating irate nursing home i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Spectacular self-absorbed tanning salon As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: stimulating irate nursing home doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Spectacular self-absorbed tanning salon it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: swashbuckling apoplectic electric furnace hall Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Topaz mind-boggling piazza quadroon you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: twinkling private investor psychic Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: lime hairraiser spot turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: violent azn mental disorder (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: mustard pisswyrm As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Gay Cheese-eating Puppy The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Bat Shit Crazy Crackhouse Partner star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Gay Cheese-eating Puppy still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: pea-brained cerise brethren dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Duck-like vibrant weed whacker church Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Big newt school cafeteria So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Dull Domesticated Alpha Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: curious startling senate A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Garnet Infuriating Boltzmann two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: light wagecucks C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Anal razzle factory reset button trust fund As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Glittery theatre gaming laptop Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Razzmatazz deer antler stage Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Razzmatazz deer antler stage You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Dun telephone Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Dun telephone A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Twisted french chef bawdyhouse andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Frisky sneaky criminal Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: dead goyim mad cow disease As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#44008916) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2)#49827228) |
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