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I found whok's 2005 novel excerpt, jfc
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Date: June 6th, 2019 2:55 AM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor I never thought I'd do it, but I finally found it.
http://www.ilovephilosophy.com/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=166449 |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 9:26 PM Author: Crusty Aquamarine Kitchen Party Of The First Part Ty. What an awful hunk of literary shit. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357077) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:03 PM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357174) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:10 PM Author: Insecure nighttime field boltzmann Hey fuck you nigger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357197) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:57 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman So that's the IRL excerpt, whok? It's worse than I thought 😱 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357754) |
Date: June 6th, 2019 2:59 AM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor More interesting whok-related threading:
http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=707335&forum_id=2#8815649
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1444726&forum_id=2
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1582700&forum_id=2#17456061
http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=1435809&forum_id=2#16157379 |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 10:58 AM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38348500) |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 10:33 PM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38351861) |
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Date: June 6th, 2019 11:06 PM Author: Maroon Boiling Water Crotch To be at a fair,
There is more to eat than ice cream and cake. Some people go on dates and have corn dogs and fried dough. Sometimes there is a pie eating contest with delicious apple pies where contestant don't use their hands.
TBF running honiara schtick 1.0
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Date: June 7th, 2019 9:07 PM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357037) |
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Date: June 7th, 2019 10:27 PM Author: Glittery immigrant fake news, it’s literally one sentence (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357251) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:58 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman Not fake news, whok confirmed above.
Remember that whok was a 22-year-old dude who knew nothing about writing back then (not that he knows anything about writing now) but that's literally his "excerpt." |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:00 AM Author: Insecure nighttime field boltzmann Whats so bad about it, cunt? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357757) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:03 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman Hard to tell, dude. It doesn't draw you into a story, describes a bunch of stuff that doesn't make a lot of sense, poorly written. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357770) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:06 AM Author: Insecure nighttime field boltzmann Poorly written, how?
I hope you know the guy/loser who stole the excerpt was a jealous and failed writer himself who posted it on his own message board and used sock puppets to criticise it. |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:21 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman Confirm 2 things:
1. You're the IRL whok
2. That's the IRL excerpt written by you/him |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:27 AM Author: Insecure nighttime field boltzmann Subject: ... Nigger (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357819) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:50 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman WTF (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357837) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 2:18 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman Ok, if you want more details, here they are:
Excerpt (definition): A passage or quotation taken or selected from a book, document, film, or the like; extract.
Excerpts are supposed to be longer than that measly piece of trash. I would expect a FULL page to get an idea of what the larger work that is being showcased will cover.
What you wrote is literally a run-on sentence chunked together into a full paragraph. It almost looks as if you're asking "Hey, can someone tell me if I can write in the English language properly? I just took English 101."
Srsly, I hadn't read the excerpt when I first read what damn daddy wrote about it, but he's spot on:
"He spent a lot of time bragging about some stupid as fuck novel he was writing. the samples he showed to the bort indicated that whok may have suffered from blunt-force trauma to the skull at some point when his brain was still developing." (Ref: http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=2840029&forum_id=2#27570333)
Sorry, whok. This doesn't mean you can't improve, though. Why not take a creative writing course and an English 101? |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 3:28 AM Author: Self-centered Jap Public Bath Dood just tell me whats wrong with it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357906) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:00 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman I went into DETAIL about it. You don't understand what I wrote? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357937) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:00 AM Author: Self-centered Jap Public Bath So you have no idea and are just a vile cunt. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38357939) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 4:17 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman What questions do you have? Be specific. I already said its a run on sentence into a chunk or paragraph and short enough that cant qualify as an excerpt. It looks like what an 11-year-old would ask his teacher at his first try at writing something.
Ask away if you have actual questions. No clue wtf you want to hear. |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:04 PM Author: Insecure nighttime field boltzmann Novels aren't explicitly subject to perfect grammar and form. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38360752) |
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Date: June 9th, 2019 2:55 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman WTF are you saying here.
Even if that were the case, we'd have to then be blown away by the content. You only provided a tiny excerpt where content and grammar are shit.
Provide a full page and then we can talk. |
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Date: September 20th, 2026 9:21 AM Author: Fucking Fuckface "Poorly written how?" I don't see why it matters whether it was pen to paper, fingers to keyboard, or rudimentary speech to text. It's fucking terrible no matter how it was barfed into the world (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#50144972) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 11:56 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38358699) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 12:35 PM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman whok? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38358819) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 1:54 PM Author: provocative orchestra pit fuck you, nigger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38359036) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 7:17 PM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38360123) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:21 PM Author: Insecure nighttime field boltzmann TITMFCR (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38360788) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 10:43 PM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman ? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38360866) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 1:04 AM Author: Self-centered Jap Public Bath 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#39813962) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 2:10 PM Author: High-end twinkling tanning salon wtf that was awful (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38359084) |
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Date: June 8th, 2019 3:21 PM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman Titcr (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38359329) |
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Date: June 14th, 2019 12:18 AM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#38387165) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 12:35 AM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#39813773) |
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Date: March 20th, 2020 11:34 PM Author: Twisted pink temple black woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#39822271) |
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Date: June 13th, 2020 11:09 PM Author: Alcoholic Private Investor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#40412654) |
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Date: July 15th, 2020 1:31 AM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#40610764) |
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Date: July 17th, 2020 1:34 PM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=897971&forum_id=2#10505289 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#40622701) |
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Date: September 29th, 2020 6:24 PM Author: talented mischievous fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4277426&forum_id=2)#41010648) |
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