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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Aromatic point As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: cheese-eating stead goyim "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: flirting dead parlour therapy they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Razzle State Depressive Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: disrespectful chartreuse clown candlestick maker As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: swashbuckling set Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: exhilarant frisky institution round eye “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: vigorous locale (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Aromatic point i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: exhilarant frisky institution round eye Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Aromatic point C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: cheese-eating stead goyim "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: flirting dead parlour therapy Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: exhilarant frisky institution round eye Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: flirting dead parlour therapy You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: exciting laser beams While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Garnet Sexy Orchestra Pit Background Story (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: fishy razzle-dazzle blood rage new version As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Aromatic point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: greedy trailer park voyeur (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Adventurous becky (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: cerebral center hairy legs (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Histrionic turquoise step-uncle's house Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Stimulating Hot Home Dragon As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: aqua sanctuary french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: salmon mood queen of the night (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: charismatic mischievous shrine FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: learning disabled temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: swollen carnelian menage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: yellow odious school cafeteria (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: jet sticky bawdyhouse police squad (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: greedy trailer park voyeur (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Vibrant very tactful national people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: learning disabled temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: learning disabled temple As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: vigorous locale i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: laughsome keepsake machete faggotry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: vigorous locale i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Haunting talking kitchen toaster (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Heady useless factory reset button A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Amber Theater Stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: cheese-eating stead goyim sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Embarrassed to the bone passionate sound barrier i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Aromatic point i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Embarrassed to the bone passionate sound barrier As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Aromatic point doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Embarrassed to the bone passionate sound barrier it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: flirting dead parlour therapy Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Alcoholic mad cow disease you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Concupiscible buff school goal in life Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: vigorous locale turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: Amber Theater Stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: swollen carnelian menage As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Marvelous lay The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Heady useless factory reset button star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Marvelous lay still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: exhilarant frisky institution round eye (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: salmon mood queen of the night Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Trip stock car A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Maroon Abode So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: greedy trailer park voyeur attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376711) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: mildly autistic cracking forum tank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: spectacular multi-billionaire (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44008882) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: fear-inspiring fluffy public bath (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: Glassy Excitant International Law Enforcement Agency wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44722507) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: Bull headed house indirect expression (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: Burgundy cruel-hearted theater (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Ultramarine giraffe main people High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Haunting talking kitchen toaster (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: diverse codepig Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Hideous Unholy Community Account Karate A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: ruby ladyboy skinny woman two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: lascivious senate liquid oxygen C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Bat shit crazy chrome dog poop trust fund As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Pearly Location Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: laughsome keepsake machete faggotry This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: spectacular multi-billionaire (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Multi-colored slimy native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: spectacular multi-billionaire (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Dashing Cowardly Pit Genital Piercing writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Pale maniacal private investor What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: greedy trailer park voyeur (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Mauve supple patrolman Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Mauve supple patrolman A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: frozen church building andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Onyx Splenetic Faggot Firefighter Hall I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: laughsome keepsake machete faggotry great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Galvanic toilet seat Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Alcoholic mad cow disease A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: Alcoholic mad cow disease (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: Alcoholic mad cow disease (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: Mind-boggling Old Irish Cottage Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: mustard dilemma As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: cheese-eating stead goyim OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Silver magical fortuitous meteor i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2).#49827363) |