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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Henna blood rage As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Flickering comical athletic conference "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Hairraiser yellow telephone they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Underhanded sound barrier Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: buck-toothed cumskin gaming laptop As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Heady slate theatre Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: rambunctious orchestra pit jewess “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: house-broken fragrant deer antler mental disorder (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Henna blood rage i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: rambunctious orchestra pit jewess Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Henna blood rage C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Flickering comical athletic conference "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Hairraiser yellow telephone Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: rambunctious orchestra pit jewess Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Hairraiser yellow telephone You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: effete gold national incel While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Wonderful associate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: tantric crotch As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: jet-lagged purple university kitty cat This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Henna blood rage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: multi-colored insane son of senegal roast beef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Insecure Reading Party (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Indecent Brunch Legal Warrant (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: mustard pisswyrm nursing home Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Snowy Histrionic Persian As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: marvelous talking house (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Appetizing trump supporter (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: dun mother FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Ocher Potus Parlor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: jet-lagged purple university kitty cat (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Mind-boggling alpha voyeur (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Swashbuckling halford digit ratio (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: diverse grizzly pozpig trailer park (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: multi-colored insane son of senegal roast beef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: slap-happy arrogant coffee pot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Ocher Potus Parlor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Ocher Potus Parlor As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: house-broken fragrant deer antler mental disorder i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: floppy narrow-minded lay brethren (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: house-broken fragrant deer antler mental disorder i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Laughsome adulterous box office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Honey-headed Rehab A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: unhinged glittery bawdyhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Flickering comical athletic conference sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Passionate patrolman i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Henna blood rage i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Passionate patrolman As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Henna blood rage doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Passionate patrolman it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Hairraiser yellow telephone Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Emerald stubborn gaping gas station you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Walnut impressive kitty address Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: house-broken fragrant deer antler mental disorder turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: unhinged glittery bawdyhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Mind-boggling alpha voyeur As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Vigorous community account resort The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Honey-headed Rehab star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Vigorous community account resort still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: rambunctious orchestra pit jewess (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Appetizing trump supporter Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: marvelous talking house (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376336) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: vivacious sneaky criminal stage A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376358) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:09 AM Author: Navy Excitant Heaven (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#44008930) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Tan Vibrant Range So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Tan Vibrant Range Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: confused people who are hurt boistinker I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376419) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Bateful Public Bath A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Mentally impaired umber space Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Crusty alcoholic wagecucks newt A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: pungent amber pistol philosopher-king andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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