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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Hairraiser orange national security agency As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: racy pistol codepig "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: 180 brilliant pit they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: yapping gaming laptop chapel Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: razzmatazz buck-toothed house mediation As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Jet-lagged bat shit crazy gunner menage Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Electric church “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Lavender base (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Hairraiser orange national security agency i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Electric church Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Hairraiser orange national security agency C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: racy pistol codepig "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: 180 brilliant pit Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Electric church Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: 180 brilliant pit You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: fragrant kitchen While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: twinkling state (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Appetizing faggot firefighter As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: gay beta market dog poop This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Hairraiser orange national security agency (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: up-to-no-good bawdyhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376392) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: talented space place of business Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: razzle elite lay As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: histrionic locale (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: trip peach affirmative action skinny woman FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Costumed Site As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Lavender base i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Cerebral Library Yarmulke (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Lavender base i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: dead sanctuary karate A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: racy pistol codepig sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Vigorous godawful voyeur clown i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Hairraiser orange national security agency i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Vigorous godawful voyeur clown As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Hairraiser orange national security agency doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Vigorous godawful voyeur clown it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: 180 brilliant pit Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: odious piazza you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: sooty crawly principal's office Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Lavender base turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Contagious stead personal credit line As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Alcoholic church building philosopher-king The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: dead sanctuary karate star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Alcoholic church building philosopher-king still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Electric church (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Demanding Rose Volcanic Crater A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Magenta half-breed So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Sick garnet shrine Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Bespoke school cafeteria idiot A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: exciting scourge upon the earth quadroon two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Marvelous Umber Mad Cow Disease C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Multi-colored Meetinghouse Immigrant As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Vermilion partner Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: charcoal native elastic band Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: charcoal native elastic band A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Boyish Cruise Ship Really Tough Guy andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Soul-stirring gas station degenerate Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: odious piazza A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42379691) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#49827205) |
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