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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: stirring wine abode kitty cat As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: curious cumskin persian "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Razzle-dazzle market they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: bisexual opaque address Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: crimson aphrodisiac potus center As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: painfully honest public bath Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: confused depressive “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Excitant Principal's Office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: stirring wine abode kitty cat i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: confused depressive Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stirring wine abode kitty cat C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: curious cumskin persian "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle market Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: confused depressive Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle market You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Sexy dragon While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Self-absorbed Flickering Stag Film (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Razzle ebony lay As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Adulterous University This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stirring wine abode kitty cat (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: greedy dysfunction senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: ivory locale generalized bond (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Laughsome Crackhouse Therapy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Mauve Flirting Library Cuckoldry Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Emerald forum shitlib As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: amber awkward corn cake business firm (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Peach garrison azn (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Irradiated Navy State FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: mint exhilarant home (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Adulterous University (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Claret pisswyrm orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Bright Rehab Prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: greedy dysfunction senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Puce hall (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: mint exhilarant home (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: mint exhilarant home As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Excitant Principal's Office i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: embarrassed to the bone violent tanning salon (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Excitant Principal's Office i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: hairraiser faggot firefighter bawdyhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: boyish useless casino international law enforcement agency A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Spectacular jade useless brakes double fault (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: curious cumskin persian sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: sadistic national tank i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: stirring wine abode kitty cat i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: sadistic national tank As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: stirring wine abode kitty cat doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: sadistic national tank it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle market Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Pink wonderful sex offender you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Charismatic half-breed Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Excitant Principal's Office turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: Spectacular jade useless brakes double fault (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Claret pisswyrm orchestra pit As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Appetizing Smoky Place Of Business Incel The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: boyish useless casino international law enforcement agency star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Appetizing Smoky Place Of Business Incel still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: confused depressive (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Peach garrison azn Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Carmine school cafeteria quadroon A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: thriller pit puppy So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Swashbuckling fortuitous meteor A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Mischievous Cyan Point two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Lemon Fiercely-loyal Set C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Shivering marvelous theatre mad cow disease As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Orchid big-titted fat ankles Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: histrionic goyim tattoo A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Burgundy boistinker andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#49827228) |
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