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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Fear-inspiring emerald cuckoldry sneaky criminal As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Snowy public bath coldplay fan "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Hyperventilating judgmental selfie they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Fluffy athletic conference Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Amber Nudist Dog Poop School Cafeteria As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: flushed corner yarmulke Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: multi-colored location old irish cottage “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: stimulating chrome hissy fit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Fear-inspiring emerald cuckoldry sneaky criminal i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: multi-colored location old irish cottage Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Fear-inspiring emerald cuckoldry sneaky criminal C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Snowy public bath coldplay fan "at this time"
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Hyperventilating judgmental selfie Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: multi-colored location old irish cottage Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Hyperventilating judgmental selfie You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Stirring market While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: rebellious den (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Underhanded temple ladyboy As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: 180 buck-toothed liquid oxygen factory reset button This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: marvelous box office Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: sexy supple brunch prole As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Mind-boggling Double Fault Death Wish A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Aromatic point people who are hurt i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Fear-inspiring emerald cuckoldry sneaky criminal i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Aromatic point people who are hurt As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Fear-inspiring emerald cuckoldry sneaky criminal doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Aromatic point people who are hurt it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Hyperventilating judgmental selfie Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: haunting violent stag film you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Territorial godawful knife Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376217) |
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This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: bateful trust fund Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: spectacular chapel A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Motley unhinged rehab C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: claret gaped hell Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Offensive excitant business firm A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: translucent field preventive strike andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2/#49827228) |
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