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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: aquamarine lascivious piazza As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: trip insanely creepy cuckoldry genital piercing "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Know-it-all Striped Hyena they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Supple Yarmulke Sneaky Criminal Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: beady-eyed hairy legs As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Coiffed frisky nowag pit Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: histrionic site “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Ivory Library Shitlib (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: aquamarine lascivious piazza i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: histrionic site Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: aquamarine lascivious piazza C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: trip insanely creepy cuckoldry genital piercing "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Know-it-all Striped Hyena Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: histrionic site Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Know-it-all Striped Hyena You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Mint Curious Address Stain While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Heady point reading party (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: pea-brained space newt As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Sapphire medicated principal's office coffee pot This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: aquamarine lascivious piazza (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Vivacious philosopher-king (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Gay Knife (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: passionate underhanded indian lodge candlestick maker (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Avocado legal warrant voyeur Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Bipolar wine digit ratio As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: fighting multi-colored rehab (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: disturbing heaven twinkling uncleanness (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Cerise theater FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Costumed Translucent Really Tough Guy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Sapphire medicated principal's office coffee pot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: amber self-absorbed station (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Hairraiser property (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Vivacious philosopher-king (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: jet home mad-dog skullcap (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Costumed Translucent Really Tough Guy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Costumed Translucent Really Tough Guy As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Ivory Library Shitlib i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Bull headed irradiated senate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Ivory Library Shitlib i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Bossy cracking center trump supporter (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Scarlet vigorous national security agency locus A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Excitant Nofapping Lay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: trip insanely creepy cuckoldry genital piercing sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: aphrodisiac lemon public bath boltzmann i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: aquamarine lascivious piazza i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: aphrodisiac lemon public bath boltzmann As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: aquamarine lascivious piazza doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: aphrodisiac lemon public bath boltzmann it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Know-it-all Striped Hyena Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Aromatic Sanctuary Useless Brakes you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Razzle Idiotic Sweet Tailpipe Windowlicker Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Ivory Library Shitlib turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: Excitant Nofapping Lay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: amber self-absorbed station As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Thriller alcoholic gas station volcanic crater The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Scarlet vigorous national security agency locus star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Thriller alcoholic gas station volcanic crater still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: histrionic site (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: disturbing heaven twinkling uncleanness Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: mind-boggling big-titted university A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376358) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:09 AM Author: zombie-like hot friendly grandma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#44008930) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: talented alcoholic mediation police squad So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: talented alcoholic mediation police squad Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: brass judgmental new version C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: spectacular disgusting native generalized bond Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Sick Lettuce A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: lime stead son of senegal andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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