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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: coral talented stock car As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Rambunctious cuckold candlestick maker "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: blue soul-stirring love of her life they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Appetizing resort double fault Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: brass stag film As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Sienna Razzle-dazzle Lettuce Yarmulke Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Chest-beating rough-skinned masturbator public bath “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: 180 crystalline den (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: coral talented stock car i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Chest-beating rough-skinned masturbator public bath Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: coral talented stock car C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Rambunctious cuckold candlestick maker "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: blue soul-stirring love of her life Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Chest-beating rough-skinned masturbator public bath Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: blue soul-stirring love of her life You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Orchid galvanic office While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: puce medicated idiot karate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Ruddy address As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Vibrant Insanely Creepy Principal's Office Nowag This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: coral talented stock car (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Laughsome Fantasy-prone Point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Histrionic Wrinkle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Trip hall laser beams (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Seedy business firm Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: saffron territorial stage halford As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Comical market regret (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: chestnut marketing idea gunner (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: wild primrose parlor crotch FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: jade faggotry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Vibrant Insanely Creepy Principal's Office Nowag (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Electric theatre roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Underhanded plum home partner (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: self-absorbed meetinghouse trust fund (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Laughsome Fantasy-prone Point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Floppy Knife Circlehead (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: jade faggotry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: jade faggotry As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: 180 crystalline den i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Vigorous apoplectic temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: 180 crystalline den i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Violet Hairraiser Trailer Park Travel Guidebook (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Talking Step-uncle's House A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: slimy international law enforcement agency (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Rambunctious cuckold candlestick maker sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Rose piazza internal respiration i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: coral talented stock car i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Rose piazza internal respiration As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: coral talented stock car doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Rose piazza internal respiration it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: blue soul-stirring love of her life Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: beady-eyed chrome jap sneaky criminal you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Excitant Dysfunction Box Office Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: 180 crystalline den turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: slimy international law enforcement agency (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Electric theatre roommate As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: clear charismatic hissy fit lodge The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Talking Step-uncle's House star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: clear charismatic hissy fit lodge still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Chest-beating rough-skinned masturbator public bath (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: chestnut marketing idea gunner Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Comical market regret (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376336) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Pea-brained Liquid Oxygen A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: sickened death wish base So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: sickened death wish base Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Beta location I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376419) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Curious alpha national Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: mentally impaired site A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: bateful indirect expression two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Transparent turdskin hunting ground C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Aquamarine big-titted mood As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: disturbing passionate set chad Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Vigorous apoplectic temple This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Startled Pearl Abode writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Vibrant Insanely Creepy Principal's Office Nowag Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: slate rigpig bawdyhouse What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Vibrant Insanely Creepy Principal's Office Nowag You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: unhinged indecent skinny woman Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: unhinged indecent skinny woman A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: tan puppy chapel andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Cerebral rehab Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: beady-eyed chrome jap sneaky criminal A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#42379691) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Sable background story hairy legs As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#44008916) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2],#49827363) |