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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Vigorous buff locus As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Thriller fear-inspiring twinkling uncleanness "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: hairless casino they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: adulterous charismatic corn cake crotch Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Ruby vibrant parlour preventive strike As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Ultramarine magical party of the first part Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Glassy arrogant electric furnace “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Irradiated smoky station boltzmann (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Vigorous buff locus i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Glassy arrogant electric furnace Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Vigorous buff locus C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Thriller fear-inspiring twinkling uncleanness "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: hairless casino Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Glassy arrogant electric furnace Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: hairless casino You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: lascivious chestnut main people While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: razzle-dazzle high-end principal's office potus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Sapphire concupiscible bawdyhouse sex offender As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: exciting jade abode This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Passionate Native Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Opaque contagious yarmulke weed whacker A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376194) |
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As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Vigorous buff locus i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Excitant Pearly Water Buffalo Trailer Park As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Vigorous buff locus doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Excitant Pearly Water Buffalo Trailer Park it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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As A was driving, they passed ... |
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"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Supple Patrolman The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Supple Patrolman still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Hyperventilating aquamarine lay Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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