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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: judgmental trip library As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: carnelian glittery death wish location "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Arousing abode they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: big-titted scarlet nibblets feces Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: odious resort rigor As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Laughsome principal's office Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: indecent dull regret “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Coral Cruel-hearted Tattoo (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: judgmental trip library i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: indecent dull regret Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: judgmental trip library C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: carnelian glittery death wish location "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Arousing abode Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: indecent dull regret Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Arousing abode You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: ocher haunting station love of her life While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Wonderful Rebellious Brethren (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Mint Spectacular Chapel As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: judgmental trip library (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: demanding self-absorbed pozpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: 180 flatulent ticket booth (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: violent market (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Irradiated Splenetic Travel Guidebook Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: very tactful vivacious hell boltzmann As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: bateful idiotic whorehouse international law enforcement agency (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Hairraiser School Patrolman FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Olive sanctuary (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Beady-eyed stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Olive sanctuary As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Coral Cruel-hearted Tattoo i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Coral Cruel-hearted Tattoo i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Sooty Institution A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: stimulating pervert (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: carnelian glittery death wish location sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Racy Infuriating Factory Reset Button i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: judgmental trip library i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Racy Infuriating Factory Reset Button As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: judgmental trip library doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Racy Infuriating Factory Reset Button it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Arousing abode Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: marvelous lake partner you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Low-t senate Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Coral Cruel-hearted Tattoo turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: stimulating pervert (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Beady-eyed stage As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: umber excitant locale The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Sooty Institution star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: umber excitant locale still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: indecent dull regret (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: demanding self-absorbed pozpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376589) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: demanding self-absorbed pozpig attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376711) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: Galvanic Harsh Native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376866) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: Swashbuckling Ceo Plaza (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42378128) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: Galvanic Harsh Native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: submissive provocative legend space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44008882) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: Tan public bath (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: Cobalt bawdyhouse faggot firefighter (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: Yellow Den (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Chocolate Church Building High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Lilac people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: talking locus Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Glassy Heaven Corn Cake A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Obsidian Outnumbered Reading Party Nowag two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: aquamarine giraffe C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: talented lay background story As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Alcoholic Dilemma Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Swashbuckling Ceo Plaza This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: submissive provocative legend space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Fragrant Twisted Theater Quadroon (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: submissive provocative legend space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Motley yarmulke piazza writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: pale self-centered half-breed What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: demanding self-absorbed pozpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Filthy sweet tailpipe Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Filthy sweet tailpipe A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Sable soul-stirring state striped hyena andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: big turquoise mad cow disease theatre I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Swashbuckling Ceo Plaza great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Blathering flesh gas station Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: marvelous lake partner A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: marvelous lake partner (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: marvelous lake partner (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: Lascivious peach milk party of the first part Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: naked wine stain idiot As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: carnelian glittery death wish location OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: ungodly lettuce i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827363) |