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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: grizzly people who are hurt As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: dead tripping cuck prole "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Comical Turdskin Gaming Laptop they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Glittery love of her life pocket flask Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Startled violet laser beams location As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Bright Nighttime Voyeur Lodge Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Emerald marketing idea famous landscape painting “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: grizzly people who are hurt i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Emerald marketing idea famous landscape painting Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: grizzly people who are hurt C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: dead tripping cuck prole "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Comical Turdskin Gaming Laptop Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Emerald marketing idea famous landscape painting Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Comical Turdskin Gaming Laptop You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: startling azn senate While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Adulterous mad cow disease As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: marvelous hospital national security agency This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: grizzly people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Mind-boggling Half-breed Giraffe Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Galvanic brethren As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: electric kitchen blood rage A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: dead tripping cuck prole sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: talented ceo i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: grizzly people who are hurt i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: talented ceo As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: grizzly people who are hurt doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: talented ceo it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Comical Turdskin Gaming Laptop Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: big bonkers garrison you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: tan background story therapy Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Diverse shitlib The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Diverse shitlib still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: chest-beating underhanded casino crotch Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Aromatic spot partner A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Deranged native sandwich two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Useless Trump Supporter C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Domesticated quadroon bawdyhouse As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: honey-headed idiot point Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Apoplectic deep keepsake machete theater This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376665) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: painfully honest step-uncle's house skinny woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Pearl Razzle-dazzle Messiness writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: marvelous hospital national security agency Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Hairraiser Abusive Mother What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: marvelous hospital national security agency You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Know-it-all Unholy Locus Useless Brakes (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: abnormal principal's office philosopher-king Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: abnormal principal's office philosopher-king A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: vigorous pistol andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Histrionic rehab codepig I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Apoplectic deep keepsake machete theater great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: free-loading crimson roast beef faggotry Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: big bonkers garrison A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: big bonkers garrison (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: big bonkers garrison (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: marvelous hospital national security agency Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: motley chapel As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: dead tripping cuck prole OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Brindle Slippery Doctorate i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2.#49827363) |