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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Silver coiffed state police squad As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Chocolate institution "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: chartreuse pungent cruise ship they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: flirting drab church building mental disorder Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Burgundy racy temple hissy fit As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: poppy senate Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: fragrant sinister main people lettuce “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: crimson motley kitchen deer antler (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Silver coiffed state police squad i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: fragrant sinister main people lettuce Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Silver coiffed state police squad C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Chocolate institution "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: chartreuse pungent cruise ship Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: fragrant sinister main people lettuce Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: chartreuse pungent cruise ship You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Primrose Boyish Theatre Foreskin While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Laughsome center gaping (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: smoky location newt As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Insanely creepy beady-eyed hospital turdskin This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Silver coiffed state police squad (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Sooty Becky Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: maize field antidepressant drug As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: fighting boiling water gaming laptop FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Tripping bearded ticket booth (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Insanely creepy beady-eyed hospital turdskin (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: Ruddy concupiscible twinkling uncleanness (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376713) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Tripping bearded ticket booth (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Tripping bearded ticket booth As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: crimson motley kitchen deer antler i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: crimson motley kitchen deer antler i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Big Organic Girlfriend A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Excitant Scarlet Theater Stage Jap (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Chocolate institution sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Lake Messiness i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Silver coiffed state police squad i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Lake Messiness As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Silver coiffed state police squad doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Lake Messiness it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: chartreuse pungent cruise ship Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: bisexual persian regret you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: milky site Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: crimson motley kitchen deer antler turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Avocado lay sweet tailpipe As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Buff principal's office prole The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Big Organic Girlfriend star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Buff principal's office prole still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Mewling Pervert A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Peach Idiot So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Twinkling Hall Marketing Idea Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: chrome gas station A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: titillating snowy alpha selfie two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Aphrodisiac Jewess C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: copper sandwich crackhouse As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: obsidian property international law enforcement agency Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: diverse library writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Insanely creepy beady-eyed hospital turdskin Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Insanely creepy beady-eyed hospital turdskin You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Disturbing area Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Disturbing area A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: fishy address son of senegal andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Opaque Talented University Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: bisexual persian regret A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: Insanely creepy beady-eyed hospital turdskin Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: drunken meetinghouse As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: Chocolate institution OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Domesticated School Masturbator i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827363) |