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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: 180 bearded indian lodge As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: carnelian plaza "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Rose Voyeur Hissy Fit they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Vibrant school cafeteria Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Shaky Apoplectic Spot People Who Are Hurt As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: irradiated base Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: abnormal histrionic electric furnace masturbator “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Milky wonderful state (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: 180 bearded indian lodge i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: abnormal histrionic electric furnace masturbator Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: 180 bearded indian lodge C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: carnelian plaza "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Rose Voyeur Hissy Fit Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: abnormal histrionic electric furnace masturbator Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Rose Voyeur Hissy Fit You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Jet-lagged hunting ground While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: mind-boggling turdskin (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Learning disabled sandwich old irish cottage As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: thriller french chef This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: 180 bearded indian lodge (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: titillating temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: Marvelous Emerald Pocket Flask Kitty Cat (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Adventurous tan lettuce roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: stimulating amethyst theater stage Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: bespoke orchestra pit mood As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: bisexual round eye (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Greedy Water Buffalo (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Cruel-hearted Heaven FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: slate crackhouse dog poop (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: thriller french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: At-the-ready school (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: racy cyan church queen of the night (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: dashing doobsian cumskin public bath (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: titillating temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Infuriating Stubborn Institution (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: slate crackhouse dog poop (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: slate crackhouse dog poop As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Milky wonderful state i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: primrose yarmulke (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Milky wonderful state i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Provocative flatulent parlor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: bateful sound barrier A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: big useless brakes (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: carnelian plaza sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Vermilion Razzle-dazzle Selfie Police Squad i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: 180 bearded indian lodge i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Vermilion Razzle-dazzle Selfie Police Squad As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: 180 bearded indian lodge doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Vermilion Razzle-dazzle Selfie Police Squad it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Rose Voyeur Hissy Fit Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: wine concupiscible hospital jew you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: magenta puppy garrison Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Milky wonderful state turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: big useless brakes (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: At-the-ready school As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Mentally impaired beady-eyed internal respiration mad cow disease The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: bateful sound barrier star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Mentally impaired beady-eyed internal respiration mad cow disease still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: abnormal histrionic electric furnace masturbator (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Greedy Water Buffalo Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: passionate nursing home A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Filthy spectacular tanning salon So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:54 AM Author: Rose Voyeur Hissy Fit Your stuff is the only stuff from here I share w my wife. Every time, I explain that "It's just lawyers--we get bored at work--yeah, I know, that's what makes it funny--" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376824) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:21 PM Author: Hateful Multi-colored Skinny Woman Faggot Firefighter (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377415) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: smoky sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008886) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: unhinged mental disorder area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722509) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: mind-boggling turdskin (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376432) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: big useless brakes titcr. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376504) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:10 AM Author: Hateful Multi-colored Skinny Woman Faggot Firefighter 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376531) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: titillating temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376589) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: primrose yarmulke (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376641) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: smoky sweet tailpipe holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376648) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: titillating temple attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:13 PM Author: bateful sound barrier how (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377366) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:36 AM Author: Infuriating Stubborn Institution (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722527) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: thriller french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376711) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: opaque talking menage ratface (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376866) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: federal insane boiling water (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376872) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: primrose yarmulke (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42378128) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: opaque talking menage ratface (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: smoky sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008882) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: opaque talking menage ratface this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008910) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: smoky sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44032706) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: hairraiser market (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: unhinged mental disorder area wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722507) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: Hateful Multi-colored Skinny Woman Faggot Firefighter (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: aggressive boltzmann (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Odious juggernaut High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Provocative flatulent parlor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Flirting Abode Mexican Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Bright stirring multi-billionaire A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Boyish Saffron Toilet Seat two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: walnut site hominid C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: chocolate principal's office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Ocher lay Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: primrose yarmulke This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: smoky sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: thriller french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Geriatric Cracking Trump Supporter (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: smoky sweet tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: ruddy filthpig writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: thriller french chef Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: light dead genital piercing What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: thriller french chef You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: titillating temple (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Topaz useless preventive strike Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Topaz useless preventive strike A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Glittery goal in life andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Bat Shit Crazy Chapel I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: primrose yarmulke great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: nighttime orange idiot Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: wine concupiscible hospital jew A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: wine concupiscible hospital jew (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: wine concupiscible hospital jew (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: thriller french chef Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: salmon house-broken resort As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: carnelian plaza OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Coiffed property elastic band i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Elisa#49827363) |