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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: stimulating obsidian church jewess As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: 180 buff dilemma lettuce "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: flushed hyperventilating library they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Translucent aromatic forum quadroon Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Geriatric tank roast beef As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: cerise titillating box office pervert Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: arousing zippy plaza puppy “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: onyx frozen office kitty (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: stimulating obsidian church jewess i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: arousing zippy plaza puppy Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stimulating obsidian church jewess C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: 180 buff dilemma lettuce "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: flushed hyperventilating library Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: arousing zippy plaza puppy Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: flushed hyperventilating library You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: vermilion frum wagecucks While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Electric sinister organic girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: cerebral death wish stage As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stimulating obsidian church jewess (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: cracking balding locus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: diverse piazza sandwich (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: curious main people parlour (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Trip Psychic Dopamine Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Bearded rehab As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Judgmental Pea-brained Business Firm Mediation (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: histrionic sanctuary clown (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: impressive effete school FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Saffron Love Of Her Life (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Domesticated factory reset button (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: khaki big principal's office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: Zombie-like Sweet Tailpipe (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: cracking balding locus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Floppy drunken meetinghouse potus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Saffron Love Of Her Life (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Saffron Love Of Her Life As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: onyx frozen office kitty i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Well-lubricated juggernaut (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: onyx frozen office kitty i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: soul-stirring pearl locale skinny woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Spruce bull headed site A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Rambunctious Dull Headpube Toilet Seat (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: 180 buff dilemma lettuce sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: sickened anal area i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: stimulating obsidian church jewess i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: sickened anal area As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: stimulating obsidian church jewess doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: sickened anal area it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: flushed hyperventilating library Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: spectacular metal international law enforcement agency orchestra pit you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Citrine Razzle-dazzle Center Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: onyx frozen office kitty turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: Rambunctious Dull Headpube Toilet Seat (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Domesticated factory reset button As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Vengeful shitlib The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Spruce bull headed site star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Vengeful shitlib still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: arousing zippy plaza puppy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: histrionic sanctuary clown Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Judgmental Pea-brained Business Firm Mediation (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376336) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Pink vigorous nibblets people who are hurt A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376358) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:09 AM Author: hilarious preventive strike roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44008930) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Irradiated Menage Persian So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Misunderstood Maroon Lodge I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376419) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:15 AM Author: khaki big principal's office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376574) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:54 AM Author: flushed hyperventilating library Your stuff is the only stuff from here I share w my wife. Every time, I explain that "It's just lawyers--we get bored at work--yeah, I know, that's what makes it funny--" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376824) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:21 PM Author: beady-eyed french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377415) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: fiercely-loyal prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44008886) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: cheese-eating excitant heaven pozpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44722509) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: Electric sinister organic girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376432) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Rambunctious Dull Headpube Toilet Seat titcr. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376504) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:10 AM Author: beady-eyed french chef 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376531) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: cracking balding locus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376589) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: Well-lubricated juggernaut (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376641) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: fiercely-loyal prole holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376648) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: cracking balding locus attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:13 PM Author: Spruce bull headed site how (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377366) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:36 AM Author: Floppy drunken meetinghouse potus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44722527) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376711) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: Seedy chapel famous landscape painting (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376866) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: rusted razzle ticket booth sound barrier (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376872) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: Well-lubricated juggernaut (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42378128) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: Seedy chapel famous landscape painting (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: fiercely-loyal prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44008882) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: Seedy chapel famous landscape painting this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44008910) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: fiercely-loyal prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44032706) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: Gold Tattoo Stag Film (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: cheese-eating excitant heaven pozpig wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44722507) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: beady-eyed french chef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: Boyish space (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: canary associate travel guidebook High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: soul-stirring pearl locale skinny woman (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Soggy lay electric furnace Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: White sticky native circlehead A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Swollen burgundy pocket flask two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: massive black nursing home sneaky criminal C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: concupiscible elite address As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: dead silver wrinkle Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Well-lubricated juggernaut This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: fiercely-loyal prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Misunderstood Maroon Lodge (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: fiercely-loyal prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: brindle alpha writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: pontificating arrogant volcanic crater school cafeteria What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: cracking balding locus (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Painfully Honest Corner Dragon Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Painfully Honest Corner Dragon A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: smoky talented casino friendly grandma andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: rough-skinned magical hospital I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Well-lubricated juggernaut great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Pale ceo partner Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: spectacular metal international law enforcement agency orchestra pit A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: spectacular metal international law enforcement agency orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: spectacular metal international law enforcement agency orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: marvelous narrow-minded halford Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: hilarious preventive strike roommate As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: 180 buff dilemma lettuce OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Stirring wine property i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Pet Relief Area (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#49827363) |