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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: orchid disgusting school cafeteria mad cow disease As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: curious aquamarine multi-billionaire public bath "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Racy wagecucks they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Fragrant demanding piazza weed whacker Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Grizzly cowardly kitty double fault As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Ultramarine talking national security agency Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: supple amber pit prole “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: balding galvanic fanboi place of business (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: orchid disgusting school cafeteria mad cow disease i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: supple amber pit prole Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: orchid disgusting school cafeteria mad cow disease C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: curious aquamarine multi-billionaire public bath "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Racy wagecucks Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: supple amber pit prole Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Racy wagecucks You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: appetizing candlestick maker twinkling uncleanness While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Swashbuckling point (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: brilliant aromatic filthpig school As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Vigorous learning disabled therapy This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: orchid disgusting school cafeteria mad cow disease (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Angry immigrant bbw Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Shimmering erotic gay wizard set As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Unhinged Partner (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Ivory Stage Sneaky Criminal FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: claret spot philosopher-king (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376187) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: claret spot philosopher-king (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: claret spot philosopher-king As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: balding galvanic fanboi place of business i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: misunderstood glittery hospital community account A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: curious aquamarine multi-billionaire public bath sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: electric plaza striped hyena i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: orchid disgusting school cafeteria mad cow disease i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: electric plaza striped hyena As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: orchid disgusting school cafeteria mad cow disease doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: electric plaza striped hyena it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Racy wagecucks Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: multi-colored pungent police squad house you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: contagious parlour laser beams Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: balding galvanic fanboi place of business turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Cerise crackhouse As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: useless indian lodge haunted graveyard The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: misunderstood glittery hospital community account star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: useless indian lodge haunted graveyard still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: trip water buffalo step-uncle's house Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: dashing nowag jew A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Judgmental hairy legs wrinkle two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Diverse Lodge Macaca C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: smoky lascivious field regret As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: comical abusive sandwich Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Vigorous learning disabled therapy You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: gaped anal coldplay fan center A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: razzle-dazzle orchestra pit yarmulke andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Sadistic Shrine Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: multi-colored pungent police squad house A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#42379691) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: tubby spastic 11yo playing in toddler section Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2Reputation#49827228) |
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